You did try and Emotionally sell it however She has 3 Kids and you are Emotionally selling her on the Location the bar and and restaurant !!!! Sell her on the facilities for her children Emotionally invest her into what is going to suit her! You then sell her on Beach Haven and you are just reading the Facilites to her you need to make it more personalbe relate it to her children. I can hear on the phone you are just reading in